Get Feedback On Your Story!

Need feedback on your script? Or a fresh pair of eyes to help make your story fresh and engaging?
I'm the guy.
I give honest and constructive feedback on formatting, structure, character development, and I'll get your dialogue realistic and laced with subtext. I'll help you get your log line honed down and effective. And I'll give feedback that will help sell your screenplay and get it in the right hands.
​Give me a try, you won't be disappointed.

"Stu gave me excellent feedback on my log line and script. He is thorough, thoughtful and wise. I will use him again. I highly recommend his services." - Camilla

Log Line and Elevator Pitch

I'll help you master the basic 4 elements of a great log line for your story:
1- High Concept Title
2- Irony
3- Compelling Visual Image
​4- Audience and Cost

Character Development

One of the hardest things to master is the meaningful character arc. I'll help give your characters depth and purpose.

Structure

I'll help you craft your story into a page-turner that hits the dramatic beats. Structure is your friend. It's very trendy to denounce the use of rigid structure, but I firmly believe that good structure can turn mediocre stories into solid movies. I'm a strong advocate of Storytelling Structure.

Dialogue and Subtext

Subtext is a key ingredient in good dialogue. It is a brilliant way to give back-story or to foreshadow future events. I'll help you get your characters sounding realistic and dynamic.
"Stu was easy to work with and fast. He was in constant communication with me and made sure I got everything I needed." - Kevin Kane

Analysis Packages​

Screenplay Read & Feedback $400
I'll read your screenplay (over 120 pages will add $2 per page) and give you one page of notes and suggestions on all aspects (mentioned above).
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Log Line / Top Sheet Development $250
​Get your pitch ready. Your log line needs to sell your screenplay or at least get it read by the right people.
Screenplay Analysis & Notes (full service) $1,000
I'll read your screenplay (over 120 pages will add $2 per page), give you 3-5 pages of notes, suggestions, and ideas. I'll create a log line for your story. And I'll add formatting corrections - as well as feedback on all subjects listed above (character development, dialogue, etc.).
Writing Partnership
Add me as a scribe on your project as a ghostwriter or a full partner. Either way, your story needs to be the very best and sometimes two writers can pull off the miraculous.